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Relay Writing - Creative Writing Prompt
Join us in relay writing. The story begins with a creative writing prompt and ends it with a new prompt. YOU continue the story on your own hub and we'll link to it. Have fun! There are more instructions at the end of this hub. The writing prompt for me in bold at the beginning paragraph came from the hub Creative Writing Prompt #2. I back out of the driveway when
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The Message is a prompt , , ,
A simple rumor can wreck a promising legal career jumped out at me larger than a eighteen wheeler hauling computers to Las Vegas going 80 MPH. The message was encrypted, yet my years of experience allowed me ease of reading it. That opening line always meant someone had to be taken out.
A Mission Again
Not ready for another mission my emotions teetered on anger, disgust and intrigue. Who was the rumor monger I pondered. And, why was I to take this person out. My skills with M40A3 sniper rifle would have to do, since that is all I had at my home. I knew who Sarah was and the work she did for the agency in Australia over the past four years. Seemed that a security clearance was being compromised by underground rumors.
Stopping at the grill just outside the mobile home backdoor, I set the message afire. Upon entering through the front I noticed an annoying blinking red light. Everyone who knows me well knows I don’t answer phone calls.
The message was from Miss Olive. She seemed calm, although a sense of frantic frustration echoed in her voice saying, “Get this done Mitch!” My mind was reeling like a freight train running out of control. Was she upset I hadn’t learned the lessons. Then I caught the message speeding like a 90 MPH slider. “Silence the rumor monger plaguing Sarah ASAP! The corps will fly you in a F-14 Tomcat.” Her final instructions emphasized to call when I was leaving for Miramar Naval Airstation.
I was met at the gate, then escorted directly to the Tomcat ready for flight. Grinning, shaking Maverick’s hand I was assured of a quick flight. His expertise as a Top Gun as well as recent years as an instructor there left no doubts. "Is your radar rusty, Mitch?" he inquired. Raising my arm while bending at the elbow, making a squeaky sound, I replied "Naw!"
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Arrival
The flight ended with a quick taxi off the runway to an awaiting car. General Marshall was there waiting for me along with a high ranking official of the Australian consulate. It was brief, to the point, and left me pondering while walking away with a map, compass, and the only luggage I brought – the M40A3 rifle.
Unfamiliar to the city I was assigned a military envoy. The countries uniform fit her snuggly showing her long, shapely legs nicely in her military khaki shorts. Taking a deep breath I wished I was not fifty-seven. I giggled aloud only to be broken by her cute Aussie accent questioning, “Do you know where we’re going?” I just smiled while walking about pace or so behind her.
Setting it Up
Arriving downtown, instructing her to wait with the car, I began the trek toward the rooftop. My mission instructions assured me the target would be in the office down the street about 100 meters or so. I trusted my hand loaded cartridges for the wind, although the clouds above may hint at velocity. An adjustment to the scope would be needed
Setting my baby up on its bipod, affixing the Schmidt & Bender scope atop I was ready. Soon, long brazen orange arms stretched outward. The puffy darkened clouds morphed into tranquil, subtle shades of lavender. Stealthy eyeing down the scope I monitored the fifth window down and three from the left. The movement showed three individuals drinking hot, steaming drinks.
Taking a moment away from the weather, the target, my weapon, gently tearing the envelope, pulling the picture free, my heart jumped. Getting up I was confused. I knew the target. I remembered the last time we were together in Hawaii some twenty years back. That was the only time we had met. Drifting in thought a moment I remembered , , ,
Your Mission is , , ,
Here is your writing prompt –
Drifting in thought a moment I remembered , , ,
- Create a new title (this one was The Target)
- Write a creative response (you decide point of view/genre/characters)
- Identify the opening prompt and ending prompt - include the link
- Have fun and enjoy reading the various responses!
NOTE - DO NOT copy anyone else's text...start with their ending prompt
you may copy and paste this portion, but you must edit the prompt and title
GOTO the hub article Ghosts of Christmas Past to discover all the connecting hubs with LINKS to those hubs. There is a table where you can see the transformation of this creative idea blossoming. Remember to Have a Happy and Safe Holiday!
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[missolive ONLY requests a link to the previous hub your writing prompt came from. If you desire to post other links that is your option of course. Missolive will be creating links as time allows. Or, link to the hub "Ghosts of Christmas Past" and I will be updating the links as time permits. I will update the table too. Have fun writing a prompted hub, while remembering to Have a Happy and Safe Holiday Season!]
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Linking to the Past , , ,(the Missing Link is?)
Writing is fun, fun, fun. Jump onto the band wagon and write something from the leader prompt at the end of the story. Go here to see what it is all about - - - > > > Relay Writing by Miss Olive. It won't take long. Take a look a this hub Myth Busting Proves One Hour Internet Article is Truth and then go for it.
Drifting in thought a moment I remembered , , ,
(There is only one guideline. Use the prompt. Your story can be anything you desire. It does not have to follow my storyline.
Maybe it will be about , , , ,
- A childhood memory
- A first date memory
- A Christmas memory
- A writing experience memory
- A ____________ memory
I know you can do it. Post it then watch it grow like a great oak in a forest of hub articles. Just remember to have fun, fun, fun , , ,
Inspirational , , ,
And if you would like to know who inspired this awesome, fantastic adventure in team writing, well, I'm not going to tell you!j
Just kidding - Sunshine625 wrote an article that inspired Miss Olive. Monday is Magnificent explores optimism and its outrageous power. A great read highly recommended. It is as good as orange juice poured fresh early in the morning.
Note: I hadn't written a hub for some time (like about 4-weeks). Sunshine625's hub and missolive's creative idea was the fuse. Like the character in "Finding Forester" Barryruhterford's writers prompt got me going.
Forester, was portrayed by Sean Connery teaching a younger writer. One method he introduced his protege to was beginning a writing project prompted by an opening from one o his many writing project hidden in old wooden file cabinets. Excellent film, Five Star Rating, which is highly recommended for writers.
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Great hub! Very creative and imaginative and quite inspiring!
Oh, and I love the movie "Top Gun!"
thanks for this intriging chapter. please put intro as we have done if tha'ts okay !
tsmog, What a challenge you leave us with! The atmosphere is charged, the characters dedicated and ironically the course of events changeable. Will you give your own spin?
Thank you for sharing, etc.,
Derdriu
This is fantastic. I added you at the bottom of mine. Also, my response was to Miss Olive though Barry Rutherford does have an interesting prompt. :-) Thanks for sharing my hub, too. Voted up and awesome!
Hi tsmog -
Barryrutherford has continued Relay Writing and has written a response to this hub - here is the link
Hi tsmog - I linked your hub to my response to Barry's last prompt. You can find it by clicking on my profile. It's called "Relay Writing-Creative Writing Prompt #4."
I caught your comment on missolive's original post regarding your response to sholland's prompt. Where can I find it? I'd love to link it as well.
Hi tsmog! Relay Writing now has a forum if you'd like to join us! Glad to see we are getting responses :)
Hiya tsmog, how exciting! I enjoyed reading your relay story and voted up up up ... and oh so very interesting. Cheers!
Have a nice day,
Rosie
Hi Tsmog - just a heads up that Barry has responded to my prompt. It also starts with "Relay Writing"
If you want, you could add your great chart from your other hub to the end of this hub too, so all the story's sections are linked from all the sections. Thanks!
Very interesting tsmog.
Hi tsmog! I hope this comment finds you well and in wonderful spirits. I have added a new relay writing hub to the series and I have referenced you and this hub (The Target) through my storyline. It's called Holey Underwear! I'm Going Down Under!
Thank you for participating :)


















missolive Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago
I LOVE it! This is so fun - I cannot wait to see how all of these prompts do! I'm off to edit in the links! :)